Patreon.com/Alex_Fabianoki | ko-fi.com/alexfabianoki
Tulisan
membaca
1229
Membaca buku-buku
Thank you for helping me point out the mistakes in this novel!
Thank you so much for letting me know!
Aoki's father only works for Kuzan.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Fanfic means fan fiction, and the meaning of fan fiction itself refers to stories created according to the writer's wishes. So if you ask for consistency in fanfic, it is almost impossible. There may be some that you find consistent, but most are not. You have to understand that fanfic has a high level of flexibility. If you don't even understand the meaning of fanfic, then I will not respond to your foolish comment.
Alright, I will let you know that the story in this novel from chapters 1 to 150 has a fairly clear purpose, which is to develop the MC's abilities as well as the development of Uzushio Village and the Uzumaki Clan. If someone says there is a lack of interaction between characters, that is true from chapter 75 onwards, but in the early chapters, that is not the case. If the interaction between characters is lacking, then how do you explain the interactions between the MC and Karina? The MC and Kushina? The MC and Keito? The MC and Yamata-no-Orochi? The MC and Kasumi? All of that is present in chapters 75 and below. So if someone says there is a lack of interaction between characters, then you have not been reading carefully. Then why does the MC often seem to be trying to train? Isn't that quite clear? Uzushio Village will soon be attacked according to the timeline of the Naruto story. Don't you know the story of Uzushio Village being attacked by three other major villages? Have you really read the manga or watched the Naruto anime? That is why the MC needs to develop by continuing to train, not only to improve the MC's abilities but also to strengthen Uzushio Village and the Uzumaki Clan. If not, wouldn't Uzushio Village be destroyed just like in the original timeline? That is why the MC's goal is clear: to become stronger. Remember, this is a non-system fanfic novel, so if you read this novel and find the story's development slow, it's because there is clearly no nonsense system in this novel that gives the MC overpowered abilities just for completing missions by running around. Do you understand? Will this become a harem? Good question. Can two or three be called a harem? If two or three can be called a harem, then yes! This will be a harem. However, if two or three cannot be called a harem, then yes! This is not a harem. If someone says, "Ah, annoying, the heroine is just an OC," well, don't be mistaken; look at chapter 115. There, you might have already guessed the heroine besides Karina, so don't give a stupid review just because one of the heroines is an OC, because there will be one or two CC heroine characters, understand? Well, I have given quite a few spoilers, so that's it. I hope you enjoy this novel. Thank you.
You need to read up to the latest chapter before you can give a review about the interactions between characters. Indeed, in chapters 75 and above, there are more developments in the MC's abilities. Why? Because the plot involves the Uzumaki Clan being attacked. You have to understand that the MC starts off weak. Do you think this is a ridiculous system story where he just runs around becoming super strong? You need to realize that at that time, the Uzumaki Clan is about to face a crisis, so the MC has to grow stronger while occasionally interacting with other characters. Otherwise, do you want to see the MC die in vain? So don’t give a review without reading in more detail; at least read it slowly, don’t rush.
What? No interactions between characters? What about the MC with Karina? The MC with Kushina? The MC with Keito? The MC with Yamata-no-Orochi? Where is the lack of interaction? Are you sure you are reading carefully?
No, it's not a problem; I should be the one apologizing. I'm sorry, and thank you very much. There are really only a few readers like you who truly provide reasonable criticism and suggestions, rather than just throwing out stupid insults without any explanation. Your criticism and suggestions are really great, thank you, thank you very much!
Of course I understand this, I write stories with the theme of a weak main character who gradually becomes stronger, but your ignorance can't see this. You talk too much nonsense, acting like you know everything. Just be quiet, you fool!