Ash_Brittin

I really like the interaction of the characters to each other (ex:Delta and Wendy) and the grammar is quite good and the story so far is still quite interesting. overall rating 4.6

love the interaction of the characters and good grammar. no awkward forced plot either. and the development of the story is pretty good. and good update consistency.

love the development of the story so far. and the update consistency of the fic is pretty good. overall rating 4.8

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ofcourse

agreed

damn I'm liking this, yo keep it coming o(*≧▽≦)ツ