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Daniyyel

Daniyyel

Lv12
2023-09-20 BergabungGlobal
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  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel2 months ago
    Balas Dark_Drago

    Because the protagonist is incredibly stupid and incompetent. Instead of helping the heroines at the last minute and making them realize the evils of society, he simply saved each of them before they faced any setbacks. Furthermore, as he did this, he massacred thousands of people. In the end, the heroines were influenced and manipulated by a third party, and the protagonist, without even realizing it, never blamed his own incompetence for how he resolved things, nor did he realize he was just a pawn. For him, the blame lies entirely with the heroines. So now that he has gone back in time, instead of being the only one to regress and do things the right way, he regressed them all and left them to fend for themselves to realize his lack of understanding of human nature. In short, if you like to see heroines suffer while the protagonist maintains a high moral standard, you'll enjoy this story.

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel2 months ago
    Balas Dark_Drago

    Because he was too incompetent in his first life, and besides, just from what Guattari Costa said, you can tell that she, as well as others, were influenced by a third party, but it seems that the protagonist is just a pawn who couldn't understand this and is acting like a stupid child. Anyway, I knew I would find this kind of plot after reading another story by the same author.

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel2 months ago
    Berkomentar

    What a lame excuse. I mean, one minute he's stingy when it comes to giving a tip, now simply because of "laziness" he's charging 4 times the item's value. I hope the MC doesn't continue to have such an unpleasant personality. I remember that was the reason I stopped reading the first time I read the story—these little senseless events where he's stingy one moment and prodigal the next, etc., drive me crazy. Nothing is worse than an inconsistent character. But since I have nothing better to read, I'll continue. Anyway, I prefer generous protagonists; you reap what you sow. It's a shame the MC in this story is far from consistent; his character development is very poorly done.

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel3 months ago
    Berkomentar

    A typical cliché scene at the end of the chapter, maybe I would have stopped reading the story, but since the MC is rich, I don't have a problem with it. I hate poor MCs, and most of the stories I've read where the MC was poor are terrible, but stories where the MC is rich are better.

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel3 months ago
    Balas Black_Eyes140

    But what's the point of him being with women who aren't the heroines of the game? Like, the heroines are supposed to be the best and most talented, but in the end, he doesn't end up with them and gives them all to the Hero? If that's really the case, what kind of crappy novel is this?

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel3 months ago
    Berkomentar

    If there's one thing I've never seen in a story like this, but would love to see, it would be a decisive MC who could annihilate any selfish family or individual who dared to jeopardize victory. Like, even with the devil's cult around the corner, there are still selfish people who only think of themselves. These people should be the first to be massacred; only by achieving total inner unity could they overcome any external danger.

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel3 months ago
    Berkomentar

    It doesn't make much sense that they, being the hope in the fight against the demon emperor, don't have special protective and offensive artifacts. It's obvious that the academy or the powerful people of the world, knowing the importance of those chosen by the legendary weapons, would give them amulets and protective artifacts. I know that in this way, it would be difficult for them to face challenges like this, but challenges like these are only possible because the author simply swallows logic and creates a nonsensical plot to continue the story. Don't get me wrong, author, I love your work, I'm just a bit obsessive when it comes to the novel's coherence.

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel3 months ago
    Berkomentar

    Author, your novel is wonderful, but this arc is very incoherent and forced. First, when those few students died inside the academy the first time the blood crystal appeared, it was shocking; everyone mourned. Now, in this arc, it's obvious, clear as day, that the academy would never allow students to die or face such a great risk while they're standing behind screens watching everything. The academy would certainly position teachers and instructors at the test site ready to intervene if a student's life was in danger. Now, simply having the teachers stay at the academy while the students are alone in the desert facing cultists at the risk of death makes no sense at all. It's a flaw in the story, as if the IQ of the academy's leaders had dropped absurdly. Completely nonsensical.

  • Daniyyel
    Daniyyel3 months ago
    Berkomentar

    Author, you're fabulous! I had already thought about this, why doesn't the MC do anything to get richer? After all, money is very important, but I preferred not to comment because the story was so good and I didn't want to overwhelm the author with unrelated ideas. But it seems the author really knows what he's doing and has given the protagonist some financial sense, which is incredible.