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Writing Quality - Average at best, there are a few spelling and grammar errors. The major issues are with the massive exposition as the MC is a loner edge lord that talks to himself way too much. This leads too a lot of 'tell don't show', a staple of poor writing. Story Development - MC is a loner edge lord, so story just moves to make him stronger and edgier, while he trudges along all lonely. Character Design - MC is a loner edge lord with no real reason for any of that edge. No traumatic incidents, no losses, nothing. Just edgy for no reason. He also barely interacts with anyone, actively keeping away from others. Again, for no real reason, maybe some personality disorders. This kills possibilities for character development in the MC and other characters. Updating Stability- As it is completed so full marks. World background - Fairly average, lots of focus on a Spirit world, very little on the actual physical world.

This is one of the best fanfiction stories I have personally read, and I have read quite a few. The does a great job at building up new characters as well as capturing and developing original characters. The battles and political scheming are well done with good tension and logic. The author shows alot of talent in being able to switch between POVs while keeping the characters distinct.