Thank you!

I'm sorry you don't like it. But could you explain what you mean exactly?

I get what you mean, but I needed one of them to take the lead. Otherwise, I would've had two MCs. Would I have to give Luna her own harem? Why would a prideful being accept being in a harem without having their own? I did think about letting them both try to get the upper hand on the other for a while, but in the end, this is my first novel, and I'm not sure I'd be able to keep that up. Anyway, it's not like Luna suddenly turns into a toothless kitten with Hati. They'll still butt heads, and Luna won't always do what Hati says, but I did feel the need to establish some kind of hierarchy between them, and I used the reason for their abilities to do it because I liked the feature. Right, end of author ramblings. Thank you for the feedback! I hope you'll give the novel a try regardless.