Jason_Liu_1138

is it ok if u make the final list of jacks skills by the end of the story? kind of like a conclusion from his journey. that would be great thanks!!! love the story reread a dozen times already

great story.love all the skills and classes. mind if u add the special classes skills to the introductory page? sometimes after reading the chapters, iIforgot Wat does Wat for special classes

the story was pretty good up until the sale. it's like Alex suddenly became an idiot and lost his IQ and was super easy to get seduced. it's actually so frustrating. the same thing has been happening over and over with Linda, and it's kinda dumb how normally he can see his way out of traps when he can't see such a simple trap. Linda in my honest opinion has no character development and no motive. should have just made her the real villian innstead or randomly putting in political struggles with no real meaning.