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I think it’s necessary to have a chapter or two. Five might be pushing it, but at least one is definitely necessary. Thea didn’t expect Sara to get on the boat, that was a massive betrayal, and she’s the only one who knows that the two are still alive. Her mental state, and her relationships with Tommy and Laurel need to be addressed before Oliver comes back. There should also be something a bit more in-depth about her training over those years, as well as how she deals with the company, and some sort of Easter egg addressing her plans for the Particle Accelerator explosion. Maybe timeskip to the date of Tommy’s party towards the end of year three, when Oliver temporarily comes back and kills that drug dealer, since that’ll have to be different anyway. Or add in the whole ‘Tommy kidnapping in Hong Kong’ year three incident, and have Thea go to china and get kidnapped alongside him.

Roshi’s rlly old, but he’s still stupid strong, even though his physique looks sorta trashed by age. I’m pretty sure that his buff form is basically just him flexing his muscles that he usually keeps relaxed in order to save energy. He’s not actually using a form per se, just temporarily discarding the effects of his old age via sheer Roshi Power. In fact, you could say that it’s similar to the muscle form OG Trunks tries against Cell, and Roshi’s usual form is similar to Frieza’s power-saving transformations in a way, though both are loose comparisons at best. Nobody else needs to do that sorta thing thou. Least that’s my take on it.

Hanna does NOT like the dude, thou. He annoys her soo much.

Look, it’s undeniable fact that humans are weak in the dragon ball universe. Or maybe Saiyans and Piccolo are just strong? But Krillin still shows undeniable growth throughout the series, a consistent help even if he gives up too easily. Then there’s Tien, who spends so much time training off on his own that he misses some of the main events, but shows off more crazy techniques than even Roshi. Meanwhile, the only time Yamcha grows at all is when he’s being trained by Roshi, and the last new technique he ever uses is the Spirit Ball. Even in Super, never learned any energy techniques beyond the Kamehameha, flight, and the Spirit ball, it’s sad. So I don’t hate him, so much as he’s utterly useless, and I believe that I’m portraying him accurately. If I believed he was capable of real growth, then I would’ve showed him growing.

I always forget about Vegeta’s little bro. U right. Exact number isn’t too important right now thou.

She and Bardock didn’t talk much, so there’s not much to be said about their meeting. It’ll prolly get referenced later, but the whole point of it was so that Bardock would recognize her if and/or when I decide to resurrect him in the future.

She and Bardock didn’t talk much, so there’s not much to be said about their meeting. She was resurrected pretty fast, after all. The whole point of it was so that Bardock would recognize her if and/or when I decide to resurrect him in the future.

She can’t just get rid of the girl, and Noah’s soul is the same as hers, anyone who met both of them would instantly figure out her secret, so she can only either drop the girl off at some random point in the far-off future, or put her up in the Core. She wants Noah to become her ally willingly. Someone trustworthy, with a soul that strong would be rlly useful as an ally.

Ya, but she doesn’t see that. The way she sees it, everything that happens outside of canon is her fault. Essentially, she believes that everything would work out perfectly if she wasn’t there, and nothing she does can make amends for that. It’s not a good mindset at all. She wanted to create the canon timeline to gather certain firsthand data in order to prevent certain differences that will happen in the future of her version of reality.

Basically, she just ages her baby self up and argues with her. It’s a clash between the values she had when she originally entered the Dragon Ball Universe and her current values, and they’re both far too stubborn to back off. Hanna wants Noah to understand her point of view, but Noah doesn’t want to acknowledge that Hanna might have a point because that point is too stupid and painful to acknowledge.