Brady_Lustlara

The story is just weird. The MC is trying to be unique in taking over sound village which is honestly stupid because it literally has no powerful people or things. The female lead is just some random mob chick who simps after the MC which is a waste because of all the potential real characters in the shinobi world. just an all around letdown of a fic because of the ma's hairbrained schemes somehow working even with bad acting on his part.

A bit of a letdown. The MC is what superman is to humans in that he's way stronger than everyone and is a simp for one chick. The guy keeps harping about being a thirty year old but blushes when kissed. The dude must have been a 30 year old virgin in his previous life if a peck on the lips leaves him embarrassed and frozen.

Finally. I was honestly waiting for something to happen with Selena because if nothing happened then she shouldn't have been written in.

lame and unneeded filler.👎

👎

It don't mind if he killed the gnomes but it was a bonehead move considering he could have upped his future subordinates max hp by having a steady supply.

Just great, more made up useless drama. Mikoto literally told the dude that she's fine with him sleeping with other chicks but now all of a sudden fugaku either forgot or is just a drama queen trying to make more drama. Plus he chose such a mob character to fall in love with, its honestly sad.

Be more consistent. You said in earlier chapters that Uchiha had more chakra but all of sudden they're no better than civilian shinobi.

Finally got that sweet sweet space sword.

👎