Xsurae

Should be updating more and make chapters a bit more longer and more detail and info

I think the first chapter should've been a bit different and interesting need to focus more on story design

I couldn't see the Discord your server so can you please send a link below

Thx I will gladly join

haha Some of the characters only appear at the end of the book and i kinda felt stupid too

Thx

the chapters escalate to quickly it's better if you add a bit more description to your work (just my opinion （＾∀＾●）ﾉｼ)

I don't think he meant it that way

Thx I'm literally tearing up right now you're the first person to say that.

It's not what ya think