nekrom1
well, I am 18 years old, and I started my first time writing in the august of 2023 on this platform, so I ask if you like it give me support then I guess.
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I love the narrative style. It's not overly descriptive and sets up the emotions in scenes really well. There are no noticeable grammar errors which makes it easy to immerse yourself into reading the story. The plot is really interesting too. The only noticable problems would be that after some chapters, there are very long paragraphs in the chapter, which you know sometimes can feel bad. And some words or phrases seems repetitive or it could be for the story and it only felt to me. other then these min or things story is really great and of course the release rate is good.
Sorry, to all my readers for the chaotic week of not publishing chapters, I was busy with my Maternal Grandfather's funeral and funeral rituals, and because of this, I couldn't get the time and proper mind to write, from now on updates will be consistent like before, sorry again. Hope you keep reading my work.
Yeah he was my inspiration 😹
man, at least give Richard a family name 😂
I will give the first review for my own novel, I wanted to write much more but it wouldn't be good if I accidentally wrote spoilers, the novel is very unique idea that I come up and I am still writing the story and making ideas to write in it. If you got any idea no matter how small or large I will see it, and will see if it goes well in the story then maybe I will add it too, ohh and I will post daily chapter so don't worry
then can't he just go to sleep, and learn architecture, if he can't use it to learn different things then what is even the use of it
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he is now a jet
that will be too unambitious, at least jump from the space or from moon.
what she watching for this much Grey's anatomy?