Daviddanijo

This chapter was good but you constantly mixed up the team magma and Aqua roles and characters throughout the whole chapter can you go back and fix it?

This story’s DC side feels like a fusion of “Batman: The Brave and the Bold” and “Young Justice”

I had that morphing grid feeling too Only question is which generation it is?

Why haven’t you updated your story in 3 months

Everything is good about your story except for all the bad grammar and writing errors that plague every single chapter (if possible can you please go back and fix them so this story can become better to read)

Your story is amazing you are the only one i have found that can apply Pokémon in a non Pokémon world brilliantly without the world being a cartoon or anime. Why have you stopped writing though, are you experiencing writers block or something? We as readers have a right to know.

Is anyone planning on making a DC version of this story?

1. It means “a total wast of time” 2. Why isn’t your story showing up in your original works when you made this novel???

Why isn’t this story showing up in his original works if he made this novel???

You stole this story from The Incredible Muffin on fanfiction.net