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I didn't want to spend much time having him be at a young age.I appreciate the advice, though!don't worry, there's gonna be plenty of adventures!our mc will be around for a LONG time
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
I appreciate the help so much!once I reach a certain point, I would like to go back and edit the story, so these types of comments help immensely!
thank you so much!I tend to worry of under-using that I know I overuse them😅I am trying to get better every chapter and will definitely take this into consideration 💚
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
and please point out any specific words, or characters you deem I shouldn't implement in the story!
I would like to also point out, that you only have .3 hours of reading. It's a weird critique imo. I also feel you may have not read very much if you are claiming certain characters are irrelevant. either way, I appreciate the review!
I appreciate the review. every character I create has a purpose. I apologize if it's not for you!
Thank you for clarifying!
thank God this is a fictional story then