TheBlackWitch

Bro.....you left me speechless.....that was so good .....I kinda like Freya she's cool and fun.....but the chapter overall was good ......keep the good work up.

Oh no ....that's bad ...he's gonna be dead when Angelo will find out .....lol

bro....that was the coolest , toughest, most badass chapter i read in a while ....i liked the part when he smashed guy into the car !

It has a nice start . I'm curious to see what will happen , the writer had a genius idea when started to write it .......I already like Theo and I'm curious to find out more about the story......