Dr_Son

Thank you. I know it's not everyone's cup of tea but I'm hoping they can enjoy it with an open mind.

7 has been released in total with two auxillaries. I hope you enjoy.

Have to say, after two chapters in, I'm having a good time reading it thus far. Keep up the good work.

'fancy, lavish, and'

'said, bowed, and' 'said, bowed and moved' is also optional.

'din't' to 'didn't'.

not sure if 'leave' is meant to be 'live'.

only a missing quotation mark at the end.

small mishap. 'greeted' should be replaced with 'gritted'

Only near the beginning of this chapter, some of the dialogue was jumbled together. I may have known who was who, but at face value, it would be a little confusing to the unaware. An interesting story so far; so I'll look forward to how it turns out.