Universe_Supreme

I was with the harem being more focused for fallen and angels since all DxD fics only focus on devils but although I get Raynare and her people were the only female fallen introduced I think making OC's would've been better. You also said MC will be religious and that will drive his actions, but I don't know how he would use that to justify Raynare killing people for their sacred gears. Anyways I hope this story goes well for you!

Its pretty good only a few problems I have. There are only a few grammar mistakes, but author doesn't properly paragraph and a lot of the story is in huge blocks making it hard to read. Also this reads like I am reading the MC's diary don't know how to explain that. Hope the author doesn't make the mistake of every other Overlord fanfic and spend to much time in Yggdrasil and lose most audience before even making it to the new world.

Okay will check it out

Didn't say he was in Xia country is he taking a private jet to school everyday...

Transparent skin? Is this guy even human

I just have to know is Little Fairy Doctor the main wife...idk when but at some point in reading BTTH fanfics I turned into a Xiao Yixian hater...

Am I crazy or are chapters getting shorter?

I agree with this also it was annoying how MC keeps talking about protecting Freya from her destiny even though he is the firstborn now. I feel like MC is gonna be like an enhanced Elijah always trying to clean up after his siblings...maybe I'll try again when there are more chapters.

Isn't that fate his to bear?

W choice