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2023-06-23 BergabungBrazil
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  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br3h
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    I'm curious about the geography of this world, will we have more continents? Among the continents on Earth, which is the most similar to the one the MC is in?

    Ch 35 Side Story: Conflict between father and Son- Church of Sol's Version
    The Reborn King
    Sejarah · Ems_Cube
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br5h
    Berkomentar

    I honestly liked the way you structured the sun church. I'm interested in how the followers of Khors position themselves and I think it would be good to have more chapters like this, only instead of being about religions, they could be chapters explaining the history of the kingdoms of this world.

    Ch 35 Side Story: Conflict between father and Son- Church of Sol's Version
    The Reborn King
    Sejarah · Ems_Cube
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br5h
    Berkomentar

    TWO chapters in one day?!!

    Ch 35 Side Story: Conflict between father and Son- Church of Sol's Version
    The Reborn King
    Sejarah · Ems_Cube
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br5h
    Berkomentar

    Tftc.

    Ch 34 Small Feast
    The Reborn King
    Sejarah · Ems_Cube
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1d
    Berkomentar

    OMG!!! NEW CHAPTERS!

    Ch 160 Timeline and ideas(not a chapter)
    Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
    Televisi · Chill_ean_GUY
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1d
    Diterbitkan

    This is a great story. Although it's still at the beginning, I can already see a lot of potential in it. Some qualities I've identified are: It has chapters every day, there are hardly any grammatical errors, the plot is well thought out and, best of all, the characters aren't stupid. I also have a couple of criticisms: the beginning of the story is too rushed and the lack of reaction from the church of that world when it finds out about someone who has revived and claims to have known God. (The two problems I mentioned could be solved with extra chapters focused on world-building). (I'd like to say that I'm enjoying the story and wish it success.)

    The Reborn King
    Sejarah · Ems_Cube
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br2d
    Berkomentar

    You drop?

    Ch 55 Chapter 52): 4..3..2..1.. (4)
    Shameless: Growing Up As Carl Gallagher
    Televisi · Flaming_Lines
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br20d
    Berkomentar

    New chapter!!!!!!!!

    Ch 28 Unprecedented development
    Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another World Co-op Route
    Komik · Ulirec
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Balas Anonymoussammy

    Thank you for creating this story! 👏👏👏👍

    Second Chance for a Villain
    Televisi · Anonymoussammy
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    Tftc

    Ch 5 Korin Tower
    GOHAN THE LEGACY
    Komik · The_SaadKhan
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    Tftc.

    Ch 35 Chapter 34: Miss Angel
    HP: The Dream
    Derivasi dari karya · Knight_Wolf
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    Tftc.

    Buku ini telah dihapus.
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    No.

    Ch 4 idea pls
    GOHAN THE LEGACY
    Komik · The_SaadKhan
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    ... Too bad this isn't a chapter.

    Buku ini telah dihapus.
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    Tftc

    Ch 111 -Chapter 105-
    Aegon Snow
    Derivasi dari karya · Ghostrider0002
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Diterbitkan

    ???????? There are only 3 chapters sent this week and comments from a year ago, how did this happen??????????????????????????????????????????

    Transmigrate In The Novel Extra
    Komik · I_d0nt_kn0w
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    Thanks for the chapter!!!

    Ch 34 Chapter 33: Bludger
    HP: The Dream
    Derivasi dari karya · Knight_Wolf
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    Finally a chapter!!!!!!

    Ch 79 79 - Wishful Thinking
    Anti-NTR Man: I Save The Main Character From Getting CUCKED!
    Seni bela diri · Hazy_0832
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Balas Netapel

    I understand, but at least let us readers know. If you hadn't said it didn't drop I would have taken the story out of the library and never seen it again.

    Ch 23 The Jungle Grootslang
    How I Started a War in a Children's Cartoon
    Komik · Netapel
    detail
  • vinicius_Br
    vinicius_Br1mth
    Berkomentar

    You drop????

    Ch 23 The Jungle Grootslang
    How I Started a War in a Children's Cartoon
    Komik · Netapel
    detail