vinicius_Br
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I honestly liked the way you structured the sun church. I'm interested in how the followers of Khors position themselves and I think it would be good to have more chapters like this, only instead of being about religions, they could be chapters explaining the history of the kingdoms of this world.
This is a great story. Although it's still at the beginning, I can already see a lot of potential in it. Some qualities I've identified are: It has chapters every day, there are hardly any grammatical errors, the plot is well thought out and, best of all, the characters aren't stupid. I also have a couple of criticisms: the beginning of the story is too rushed and the lack of reaction from the church of that world when it finds out about someone who has revived and claims to have known God. (The two problems I mentioned could be solved with extra chapters focused on world-building). (I'd like to say that I'm enjoying the story and wish it success.)
Tftc.
... Too bad this isn't a chapter.