FireSalamander

Great plot and good writing. I am excited for more.

This story instantly captured my attention and did not disappoint. The unqiue divergence and multi character focus makes for a good read. I can only ask for more.

The story has good plot progression , pacing, and writing. My one complaint is the grammer issues though most times you can easily fill those grammatical holes when you read.

Enjoyable story that keeps you engaged. Some parts there is room for annoyance, but you can always expect that. I couldn’t ask for much more.

Very nice translation, thank you for your work Author

What a story, maybe a bit much Smut, but the style and writing make up the difference

This story is quite the little ride, particularly with how much the author can put out in such little time. It is pretty impressive.

It is pretty good, the quirk and starting situation is rather interesting. I look forward to more.