Hello, I really appreciate this elaborate and touching comment!! I can tell you’re very passionate about story writing :)

Your Grammar is immaculate I have to say... But I do feel like you're depicting all of your characters to be very optimistic, it feels sorta one-dimensional. Maybe I have to continue reading the next chapters to see more diversity and development, but overall you have a solid story! Keep it up :)

I’m glad you enjoyed my story :)))