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Maybe. I'd hardly call it a mess. I've read way worse on this app. My story has plot, direction, decent writing and grammar, and decent world building. I'm not saying it's the second coming of christ, but I am saying that it's worth reading. Especially considering the garbage novels that are usually on Webnovel.
The 35 chapters establish a LOT of information without having to rely too much on info dumps. Otherwise, due to the nature of them in their previous world and the nature of the plot I have planned, there would be a LOT of text describing and dumping. In the way I have it set up, showcasing the events leading up to their Isekai is beneficial in establishing everything. ESPECIALLY since it's a long-running novel. Context matters, and so do the establishing of my key players (Jak Yanda, Mako Kunzite, and Meru). I don't have to set up the world of Black Clover since it already exists but since I'll be bringing over aspects of the MCs original world to add some plot and extra oomph, it's needed. Everything I do is for a reason.
Yes, it's 35 chapters. However, I like building my characters and explaining things. Throwing characters from another world into a world without any buildup is weird to me. It's not going to be for everybody but that's fine. I'm confident in my own writing, writing quality, story, etc. The story is definitely worth giving a chance despite the Prologue length. Just look at how well FrostBitten did with other readers.
What preparation? Sam hasn't prepared for ANY of the eventualities happening to him. Heck, if he was truly scared, he'd just switch to homeschooling or transfer schools.
Yeah. Pick up the random flowers on a subway. Amazing move. 10/10 survival.
Smart man 👏