MrBlackWing
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MrBlackWing9hDiterbitkanWhen I started reading, I expected the worst from the comments. But it was worse than I expected. Terrible text organization quality, definitely without any proofreading and the story sometimes doesn't seem to make any sense, as if he just wrote words that connects and that's it. Dude, seriously, pause the writing for a while and do a nice edit. The way it is, I'm impressed that you are in the top 10.
- MrBlackWing9hBalas ACHILLES
- MrBlackWing3dBalas Taitiruk
Couple = 2 people Thruple = 3 people
After a few hours past dawn, and a thruple fight nothing short of fantastic... - MrBlackWing4dBalas Sky_TheEnder132Because he is too young, the 10-year-old can't use it yet.
- MrBlackWing20dBalas Guts0626
Exactly. It is with great sadness that I inform you that I have a job🥲 So writing is proving to be a great difficulty, especially with some important work things coming up (company inspection). But I promise I haven't abandoned it and I won't. I love writing the story and I have several plans for it.🫡
Ch 40 Chapter 40 - Retrieving the Black Artemis! Wind Blades in the Cliff! - MrBlackWing24dBalas ryan_morton
Ship Spirit!
Shocked by this, everyone watched the Black Artemis (name of the ship) go away and slowly disappear into the horizon. - MrBlackWing24dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09
Eventually we'll get to them and I'll see how the interactions will go. For now there are only normal people, but in New World the differences in size get quite strange. There will be a solution to this problem 🫡
And finally, on the fifth day, they managed to complete the bone refinement, and another majestic change accompanied this. Nami, previously 1.69m, grew a little more to 1.72m, while Nojiko went from 1.70m to 1.73m. They were still small compared to Noah, who was currently 1.95m. - MrBlackWing24dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09
YES! That's her name, I completely forgot...
And one interesting thing to note is that neither of the two accepted the position of Vice-Captain, as they said it should be a position reserved for the future. - MrBlackWing30dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09
Not part of it, but definitely worth learning.
"There are a total of six arts, made up of two defensive arts, two movement arts and two attack arts. With one more special one that can only be used when you become a master of all the others. And they are Iron Mass (Tekkai), Paper Drawing (Kami-e), Shave (Soru), Moon Step (Geppo), Storm Leg (Rankyaku) and Finger Gun (Shigan). The last one is called Six King Gun (Rokuogan)." - MrBlackWing30dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09
Because he's in beach cloths😂 He would have to be holding the sword at every moment, since he can't just glue it on his shorts.
And Noah did not mind either and left the sword on the ship. He might be a swordsman, but he was also a fighter. Sometimes it was good to fight with your own fists instead of cutting things everywhere. - MrBlackWing30dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09"Just as I thought." Noah smiled a little when he found out it wasn't just a simple coincidence of fate. Maybe a little, to be honest.
- MrBlackWing30dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09"Kya!" Nami shouted lightly, swinging her staff at high speed in Nojiko's direction. The force she applied was so strong that it made a shrill noise cutting through the air on its way.
- MrBlackWing30dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09
And I think it's TOO tall. I prefer a "semi-normal" height of 2~2.3m, mainly because of the women. Interactions will be pretty boring to write with the mc higher than the buildings his in.
And finally, on the fifth day, they managed to complete the bone refinement, and another majestic change accompanied this. Nami, previously 1.69m, grew a little more to 1.72m, while Nojiko went from 1.70m to 1.73m. They were still small compared to Noah, who was currently 1.95m. - MrBlackWing30dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09
Not worth it.
"Well, so this is how it will be. First of all, you two need to know about some very important things. First, about your strength levels and mine. My Devil Fruit gives me approximately an understanding of how these levels work, and currently there are ten levels for the current stage we are at. And you two are at the beginning of the second level, while I am at the beginning of the sixth level." - MrBlackWing30dBalas PRIMORDIAL_09
And hot. Now she has some competition with that new marine who appeared on the Pirate Island Arc, I forgot her name.
And one interesting thing to note is that neither of the two accepted the position of Vice-Captain, as they said it should be a position reserved for the future. - MrBlackWing30dBalas VOID_321
Yes!
The sword blows were becoming more and more dangerous, and his manipulation of the wind more skillful as he attacked. Only in a true battle would someone be able to exhibit a level of accelerated growth, and he was doing exactly that with his swordsmanship. - MrBlackWing30dBalas VOID_321
He's talking about stealing to achieve goals. But for Nami, it was all she had left to do. Imagine everyone around you dying because of a tyrant who offered you possible freedom. Either you wait for death, or do what he wants.
"You're smart. I would do the same." Well, in fact, he did the same. Stealing to feed himself was something natural for him. But after remembering this, he just smiled at them, "I have a much better proposal for you."