KingGeorgeUK

Very well done you keep getting better and better at this keep up the great work and would love to see more from a harry potter or a game of thrones version

Love the new story so far keep it up

Love it Great story Amazing to see something completely different at some points it might have seemed to be dragging in details but you managed to pull it off so we'll done

I really liked this story it was great one of my favourite story's and even though their is some bits and pieces i am not a fan of the overall fic was great Keep it up

Like this so far I hope this will be as good as the others you are definitely getting better with the story development and I like to see where you are going with this

Not my favourite but still good enough story overall although I think it could have done with a bit more personal development overall i still believe that marvel is not a great place to be as it is so complex that there can be so much to navigate

Quick ending but very well done overall but still a great story keep up the good work I will be working my way throught the others harry potter first and now this can't wait to start the next one

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One of the best story's I have read while there was some repetition in the writing I hope you do another story but with Harry being a royal wizard or spying on the wizarding world mi5 or with a mix over of being a kid and helping law enforcement like ncis as a teen consultant that could be interesting and funny

Good chapter keep it up sometimes I do wonder what the ending would come to if you take the time to think about it but I really just want to keep reading and the quality is still good Maybe not as long but if you take a day or two instead of 1 hour it will probably help