Darkknight001010

To dekhiya gupta ji, jahatak story ka bat hai to ye bakwass hai. Ab dekho hamra bat ko bura mat manna, aur agar tumko kharab laga hai to khud hi apna kahani ko padh ke dekho, tumko pata chal jayega. koi coma nhi, koi fulstop nhi, bhai samajna vi muskil hai, ki tum kya bol rahe ho. Aur [ i ] kyo use karte ho, aisa nhi kro. Es tarah se kahni batana, bhut muskil hota hai.

Good one .

Fantastic story .

Nice chapter .

The story is good for the time being , but if if I feel wrong , I will change the review . But by the way you idea is quit good.... now it would be i treating to see , how he does things without Yao lao's help .

Nice idea bro , now lets's see if the Mc uses his brain or does things like an ideot

me too .

How is the chapter ??

No comments please !!!! I am the author , its'smy responsibility to support my very own book despite of the fact that it is a trash .

Bro your knowledge is just too low . Xiao clan never a had a Earth grade technique to begin with . The best they had was of Black grade . You are ruining the story . So please stop it , ita's really disgusting .