Very interesting. The beginning is very good at pulling you into the story, the prologue does what it's supposed to. I like the character designs and descriptions although some of them are a bit longer/shorter so its jankier to read? If that makes sense. But, anyways, the whole concept seems very interesting, I like the dialogue between the characters, seems very smooth and the banter is a very touch, it feels very grounded, the characters know each other well from what I can see. The dying angel is a bit dramatic in her dialogue but it's intriguing enough to where I wanna know a bit more of her backstory, why is she so jaded and desperate, very compelling.. Only thing I think is a small problem is some grammar issues but that's fine, easily fixed. I really like it so far though and I can't wait to see what you write next! - D