Myles_Hoberg
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Quite a well written story so far, really intriguing. Though I'm curious of who the main love is, or has the love not been intro just better, and what you could also do is describe there appearance bit more, but I'm only really going of names so far. Though once again the detail in the story is beautiful and very fluent, great work.