Arafat_A

good chapter im excited for this story

five stars just because tdg fanfics are so rare, and this one so far seems to be good -------------------------------------------------------------------

nah, I liked the emotional scenes so far. They are not over done

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

heavenly body magic

the pov change is fine, its your writing style

really that's the greatest insult you could say?