Arcturus_Sirius

I decided to check the chapter before the lock, and it seems the writing has gotten significantly better.

The writing quality, at least for the first few chapters, is bad. Sometimes, the author doesn't put spaces after a period or comma. There are either words that are unnecessary or missing in a sentence, and the I aren't capitalized most of the time. Overall, the grammar isn't that. Though the plot seems interesting.

As to why he never paid attention or rather why he can't is because he simply doesn't have the time for it.*

There should be a space after the period and comma, and the sentence describing his hair and eyes should be 'was a bit on the handsome side'

you mean a bident

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maybe find the 'u' and the 'e' in Prologue

nah, she seems smart if she can figure this out

didn't Daphne say that there was a artifacts that could locate her when she was 14 years old, so it would've been useless if she didn't remember or stayed there

this isn't punishment for them, it's punishment for the people who run the place unless they're masochistic