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Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.

that's right, i think kato megumi is prettier than Ai, maybe because of her personality that makes kato megumi look perfect

while waiting for this, do you have any suggestions for mixed world fanfics with really good plots like akikan-san's shishio?

I'm so sad... But it's okay, as long as the plot is good I will continue reading it, stay strong Akikan-san

Are you the type of person who likes to travel the world? Ugh I like mixed worlds, because the plot is random and unpredictable, even though I know it's hell for the author🤣

I don't know, this is just my personal opinion, I don't want other people to hate him too, it's just that I find it hard to get into his character whatever it is, keep up the spirit Akikan san, your novel is amazing, even though I hate Linuma-kun I don't hate the plot [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

You better focus here Akikan san, I kinda hate Iluma kun's personality, and try to just combine the romantic world without having to travel to various worlds. I just gave a suggestion, the rest is up to you, Akikan-san. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I'm sorry, I can only contribute 2 power stones, I just hope to get a lot of chapters, but I'm afraid that if I'm too hasty it will lower the quality of your writing😁🙏