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ShadowOrigin

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A writer for fun! <<Discord >> => https://discord.gg/cTDCNc9WAr <<YouTube >> => https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCCwicIyC_aiUgqypxy5XE0A

2023-05-04 BergabungBangladesh
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin11h
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    So far I loved the story. Keep it up. Please do not drop it, unlike other authors. The story is good. There are some grammar mistakes. I suggest using Grammarly.

    Ben 10: Earth's Mightiest Heroes
    Komik · Firestorm808
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin6d
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    we are? or You are

    Kurama looked visibly disappointed. "What? I thought we were here to wipe out those Uchiha bastards!"
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin30d
    Balas DarkSlayer

    It ain't ntr. MC is not stealing someone's love which doesn't exist in this story.

    It wasn't just a kiss; it was a revelation, an unplanned twist in a story that he knew too well from the movies—the grand, tragic love story of Anakin Skywalker and Padmé Amidala. Except, in this universe, it was Peter who had stepped into the scene, an unforeseen variable in the equation of fate.
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin1mth
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    You are the one who wrote it. His character

    (A/N: Degenerate…)
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin2mth
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    You treat her like your Queen but she treats you like dirt. Or, She treats you like her king but you treat her like dirt. Or, You Both treat each other like dirt. Or, You Both treat each other like King & Queen

    "Never be like those men who mistreat women," She asks. "When you have your girlfriend, treat her like a Queen, and she will always treat you like her King."
    Reincarnated in the Astral World
    Fantasi · LamenThief
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin3mth
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    ? Then what about the use in other universes? I thought Peter used them in other universes. I could be wrong as I read that part a long time ago

    And sadly, the Infinity stones are nothing but powerless rocks here, as they hold no powers outside of his universe.
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin3mth
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    I must say that This was nicely executed!

    Ch 1 New Beginning
    Reincarnated in the Astral World
    Fantasi · LamenThief
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin4mth
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    I'm Spider-Man ----> wrong. I'm Combine-Man ----> Correct

    Ch 613 C613 Testing Powers
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin4mth
    Balas FamishedGod

    No matter the outcome that could have happened - He fainted & why should he try a skill in a fight instead of testing it when training? The Fact is - He fainted. So he loses. Suppose it is a dead match and if someone faints then he is good as dead.

    Earth's Strongest Couple in the Immortal World
    Fantasi Timur · FamishedGod
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin4mth
    Balas Railvas

    Well... When I wrote the review, I was quite frustrated. 😅

    Forgetful God: The Plan Went Wrong
    Fantasi · Railvas
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin4mth
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    Even though MC was not present yet, I liked reading the story.

    Buku ini telah dihapus.
  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin5mth
    Diterbitkan

    Want us to write good reviews? Then provide a complete Synopsis of the Story. Then we will see if we want to write a review or not 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱

    Forgetful God: The Plan Went Wrong
    Fantasi · Railvas
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin5mth
    Balas DaoistM7yRIF

    It’s actually neither. Every simulation is just a “possibility”. What if this happens or what if that happens? Not going on killing sprees based on something that hasn’t even happened in reality is a sign of a stable and moral character. Only arrogant young masters or hypocritical MCs would form and act on an “imaginary” grudge. By someone. Not me but I agree

    If he were to target some people and powers out of the blue solely because of the information from the life simulation, it would be quite unjustifiable.
    The Sims: I Open the Immortal Path for All Beings
    Fantasi Timur · Autumn comes after night rain
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin5mth
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    Well... What can I say?! The Comments of people feel like They are written by low-IQ people. It's like this - "Oh! she survived cause' she was lucky" "Her dad is trash" yet there is no appearance of MC

    Arrival of the Alternate World: My Identity as the Holy Emperor Got Exposed by My Daughter
    perkotaan · Dark Dot
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin5mth
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    Are you giving people such low iq?

    The viewers' initial doubts turned into denial, and now, they once again suspected and then denied that Su Yang was a hidden big shot.
    Arrival of the Alternate World: My Identity as the Holy Emperor Got Exposed by My Daughter
    perkotaan · Dark Dot
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin5mth
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    It feels like stupididity. I mean, will anyone blindly believe something online? It can also be false

    "Let's first eliminate the possibility that he's Su Qianqian's father."
    Arrival of the Alternate World: My Identity as the Holy Emperor Got Exposed by My Daughter
    perkotaan · Dark Dot
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin6mth
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    Bow? Is it a name, bro?

    Sirius couldn't help but ask. "Why didn't you tell us about this before? Knowing who he was could have been crucial in our efforts to stop him." He said, eyeing Albus suspiciously. "Do you have any idea bow huge the impact would be if it was revealed that the Dark Lord is a halfblood? His followers would start killing themselves out of shame alone."
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin6mth
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    Fact Spell? Or That Spell. Just use Grammarly to fix these errors. It is free bro

    Intrigued, MJ couldn't help but ask, "What did you do? I've never seen fact spell before…" When Peter mentioned looting, she assumed they would simply be taking all the books, but the spell seemed to return them all to their original places.
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin6mth
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    Bro.... Fix the grammar. It should be *any of your men in* not *any of your men is*

    Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Filem · AlienWarlord
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  • ShadowOrigin
    ShadowOrigin7mth
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    It will be funny to see it

    "Well, then they get to have an existential crisis, I guess…" Peter didn't really care. It was too much work to try and hide it. "If they get into any trouble, let me know."
    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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