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fun story hope u keep it up :)

story was going fine and was enjoying him building his own town but then the fiancé is introduced, and it felt like the whole story was ruined. everyone finds her perfect and it instantly becomes forced and unbearable quickly. why im dropping. 1st his fiance is also a reincarnated. 2nd he is already what feels like the peak of ability. 3rd he is 10 years old and he is introducing cars trains, electricity and more to the world in what i believe has only been less than a year. 4th everyone instantly becomes dumb around the mc and none find anything odd when he pulls the impossible out his ahh. 5th similar to reason 3 everything feels super rushed and forced plot, romance, dialogue. ... maybe come back to check out future chapters if anything changes in a year but doubt it.

really enjoying the story so far, hope to continue reading more soon.

started off fine but it quickly became obvious that China is apparently the greatest place in the world along with everything that comes from it. if the story focused more on the games along with the relationships then the story would be a lot better. Now on to the relationships the conversations feels forced, and after adding the girls for the company started not even wanting to check in the with story any more and when i do i just skim through the chapter.

honestly like the story but i hope the roles reverse with tsuna and shimizu. not enjoying how much of a simp it makes him look feels wierd.

can honestly say this is my new favorite pj fanfic

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was wondering why pokemon story was deleted?

great story!

story was alright but 18 chapters and its locked, honestly did not have enough to get any type of attachment to start buying chapters, will be dropping this here.