Binge_Reader69

1/5/1/1/1, the story had good potential but it was fumbled so fucking hard, its a system fic with being able to put points into one of 3 stats,agility strength and intellect, the MC has been putting points in since he was a literal baby but the author has not ONCE shown what his stats are just that he keeps putting points in, at every single point of the story where the MC 1v1's someone it states the person he is fighting is stronger than him, including ragnar his brother and the other kids his age, this may aswell not be a system fic since it literally does not matter in the slightest, another issue is that every chapter is just he gets a quest from the system, he does the quest and then it talks about him having a different path to ragnar it also is nonstop going on about him not letting anyone find out about his system and being better than others at things when all that would happen if they do find out he is stronger than natural (which he aint if anything he is weaker) is they would say he was blessed by the gods cos thats what they did back in those times, another thing is the author has no clue wtf actually happens in vikings with their dad for some reason being in charge rather than the earl, i could list more but i realise how much ive just typed, all in all this pissed me off

nah i cant read this bro, its so stupid what the fuck is the point of the system if no matter how many points he puts in EVERYONE is stronger than him, you are not keeping track of this in the slightest and its reached the unbearable point

no it wont in fact i feel from reading this that not including what his stats are is ruining this, he has been stacking points since he was a kid and yet almost all the people he has fought so far have been bigger and stronger than him, its inconcsistent and being able to see what his stats are would mean we have a reference for what he should be around at that point in time, you should show what the stats are every time he adds points, that wont ruin the flow thats just how system stories are

these are all just copy pasted from his other storys but he changes the names

death pulling up to their manor wards, (they are in great peril)

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