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I will try and your intution is right it is my first book and as english is not my daily use language it is very difficult to make it fun to read

Vol-1-What if Ash(pokemon mc) is an isekai mcVol-2:- what if pokemon looked liked humans

This is too similar to pokemon its likeWhat if Ash(pokemon mc)will be pervert and got a new life

Not going give any criticism, you are doing good mate keep it up and try to avoid mind cnotrol because it doesn't gives any suspense or risk like everything can be done my mind control. And good to see an indian fellow as here nobody reads or writes novel

Thannks for the chapter

Are you indian? Beacause in india no one read novel ,so it is nice to see a fellow indian writer

Thanks for the Chapter

I think buff effectiveness would became half and he can't get the limelight making it imposaible to win the hearts of heroines

Is this novel not have mc pov because i really liked the concept but i hate narrator pov