master_ghoulking

Leo started smoking that copium pack at this moment

Sure

You had a hero worship phase really that explains part of why you like saber(arturia) so much you see a bit of yourself in shirou with wanting to save people yeah I kind of get it sabers good but I Can see saber picking her duties as king over you

Story is good so far and his magecraft becoming a branch of the system or what like spells reinforcement and structural grasp

sounds like one

I have high hopes for your re-write your fate work as to be one of the few fate works I actually re-read so i have high hopes for you and hope you succeed in all your future endeavors.

Saber is mid bro compared to all the girls in the nasuverse and fate franchise bro sound like the kind of person to love mashup the most in fgo like i get that saber is most peoples no 1 waifu but to me she's okay but not no 1 that sport goes to Nero uwu always and forever

I mean he wasn't exactly picky about it but maybe it was just easier to use worms to gain immortality and to base his Wish.com magic on instead of birds. plus birds don't gather together to form 1 abomination as worms do plus he as worms with wings as shown by kariya in fate/zero so he as the sky and ground covered for surveillance

A man who first took a step on japanese soil and said worms yes worms are his favorite insects and insects are his favorite creatures so yes he decided he wanted to gain immortality through worms of all things cause he loves wormussy

i hope author the best re-writes have great potential to improve in certain areas where the original was lacking.