Alan_Grimlord

i finally finished volume one and now volume two is starting, I want to say that the writing and grammar of volume 1 were not good I just want to give a heads up for the people that wants to read it, if you and tuff it out to reach volume 2 I would really like that but if you don't want to force yourself to read it then don't again thank you for reading this novel, I have other novels that are coming out soon you just gotta wait and see

I dropped the novel because I lost interest in it and also because I didn't know what I was doing the story is not so great so thanks to those who have read this series. if you want to read more of my works then Read Grave Borne Revenant. That story is way better, there are still some mistakes and some small retcons but I found a way to make them work at this time 4/12/24 Volume one is almost over also because i didn't upload for an entire month the chapters are free so I suggest that you catch up to it now

Id like to say sorry for your the bad grammar

Look what i drew☺️

and just like that we are close to the end of volume one, sadly I had to rush it because I'm kinda messing up the world a bit too much I wanted to do more but if I stayed writing volume one then I would have dropped this series I already take to much breaks on this series. id say volume one will have about a hundred chapters

great first few chapter's its kinda to like I mean the sentence kindad like space out a bit you just fix that the story has potienal to be good not one of the greats but good https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOtwfyMa5mM&list=RDjvU4xWsN7-A&index=27

i think this was a review sawp many other authors do this on this platform

Thanks 🙏 i keep spelling that word wrong any way what do you think of the story so far?

Yep i should probably go and fix that💀

the story is pretty good so far there were a few challenges (Because I'm half asleep rn lol) it has pontinoel to grow into a goos story so keep up the work