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Im so excited for when they start fighting the sect

dammmm bruh u crayyy crayyy

The idea is sound and original. However I have a big problem with the conversations, they sound way too robotic; I mean no real human beings talk like this. It kind of breaks the immersion and then i start noticing other things that were being overlooked. This writing style needs work, so i will continue to observer in later chapters. Good luck

Tftc hopefully this fight doesn’t end soon

Tftc im loving these fight scenes thry have the perfect amount of details

what many after Indra Ōtsutsuki the first one was directly madara and his brother in total there about 10 total ppl with it so why is zetsu saying as if he has seen hundreds