Ayushi_Ather

I'm a female

I guess you could add a bit more of unohana's original personality rest is fine

terrific >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Please keep writing

loved it.................................

loved the idea please keep uploading and don't drop it

Loved it I've had been looking for a bleach like this for quite a while please continue writing and don't drop it

Loved it Please keep writing and please don't drop it. .....................................................................................

Loved It >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...............................................................................

I loved the story and the plot is good. The grammar is fine The only things I didn't like were how fast the story progressed and the strange scene that skipped without any indicators which made reading it a bit confusing. Besides that everything was great.

more chapters please ‐--------------------