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Author , do u know human interactions? Seriously , instead of writing idiotic stories, u should first watch the whole one piece again and see how people make friends or how they interact . Your story is too forced. The decisions people take around mc makes no sense. For example - just because mc killed many pirates and kept peace in the east blue sea, doesn't mean that aokiji will ask him to be his subordinate and grant him full freedom . He's an Admiral, someone who has to care about many things in the whole one piece world. Bruh
everything is good. But seriously author, can u please stop the ridiculous voices of the audience. It is too weird, and feels like I am reading a Chinese young master story😒. Cringe. For example, which sane person speaks about a Billion bounty pirate by saying " he's a rookie, it's not his place , there are bigger fishes in play here." I am vomiting by the sheer amount of cringe I just read.
I read till chapter 224, it's where first game ends and second game starts. Firstly author , I totally disagree with our mc trying to force everyone on Jayden like he was trying. it was unnecessary. Secondly, acting like nothing happened after Jayde betrayed him was too frustrating. I mean why the need of keeping that a secret?? Zeus already threatened him openly and Jayden already betrayed! for fuck's shake, I was too angry reading that. Lastly author, I really can't read on after the end of the first game. it is just too sad. 4 people whom he considered close all died. He is being exiled by the very kingdom he protected. It's too sad and frustrating. Just too sad. Also I don't like this new academy story thing. It's like the start of a new different story with new sister and new mother and new characters. So am dropping the story.
I am dropping after the death of the Uchiha girl who had crush on mc. the mc and she were classmates in the academy , then they were together as genins under the same teacher, they were together in completing missions. Mc has knowledge of the future, he is strong, killed many jonins and has many shadow clone and disguising techniques but he still didn't save her. he was busy collecting eyes of Uchiha instead of doing anything to help her. Author, mc is training like her for the past 6 yrs all for what? to be a cold emotional and alone person? what's the point of being a God if he can't even save an important friend( someone he liked like romantically).
so let me understand something, paper wasn't invented before mc came????????? seriously? then how the hell did they write letters? also is making papers from wood that easy? the author clearly is an idiot. Seriously, at least see what garbage u are writing. also what's up with the eldest son of the count? his first assassination failed and now he didn't try again for 2 months straight? mc was going out so many times , what the hell was the eldest son doing? seriously the novel is trash. but yeah if u are someone who just likes to read about someone becoming trash to awesome without using your brains, go ahead, this is for u I guess
I have so many questions about the things happening and author gives no explanations. like how the mc knew so many things that he predicted, author never explains. I read 120 chapand seriously I won't be surprised if I find the author blew the entire planet and started a whole different story for the mc bruh. But still I liked the story but slowly mc clearly is shown to be favoring girls. How is he a villain? I started reading the story on the premise that mc would be a villain and he isn't as the story is passing. I am dropping it now after reading 120 chapters.
One of the best novel regarding transmigration and cultivation i have ever read. Definitely worth reading!
I have never seen a more absurd story than this. Also I think I read more than 200 webnovels and this mc has the to be the most stupid one possible. He had the most ridiculous powers and he took the most ridiculous decisions. He is inside the imperial Palace and he fights against a prince openly. What was he thinking? A 2 yr old child will also know that a prince would have strong bodyguards around him. On top if that he tried to fight him openly in the imperial palace. The most disgusting thing about this novel is the emotional part with girls. Mc tried to die many times just to let his women escape. Who were his women? Yeah a girl whom he met 2 days ago and hooked up with them. Yeah u heard it right, for such women the mc was ready to give up his life. Also at one point when the women was in danger , Mc comes and says nobody can hurt his women and fights bravely in the imperial palace. then when more powerful guards come he thinks he's going to die. Can there be a more delusional mc than him? he's just a 4th realm person and tries to fight inside the Imperial palace. Most annoying part is when u realize he can easily leave and develop slowly in some other region. there are girls everywhere. But no , he has to stay in the imperial palace itself. I simply wonder what went through the author's head to write such a story.
The different cultivation realms are given in detail in the auxiliary chapter or chapter 0 which is titled "CULTIVATION REALMS" Please refer to it if you have any questions regarding cultivation realms. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask in the comments, I will definitely answer. Thankyou 😀