Vikosa

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thanks for the chapter 👍 keep up the good work

The story is good, but it's always the same thing "I want to create a Jedi Order with love and balance in the Force." Honestly, there are hundreds of stories like that on this app. What you've done has already been done, and it's boring. Anyway, your story is good, but i think Palpatine should pay a visit to your little group and his Order, giving them a purpose, or even turning your MC to the dark side: "You saved Anakin, but you didn't save yourself, so now you're the new enemy. And if you can't handle criticism, telling me something like, "If you don't like it, don't read it." Honestly, like I said, your story is good, and I like it because there aren't many good Star Wars fanfictions. But there's always a "but," a lot of people have already written something like this before you.

Thanks for the chapter

Thank for the story 😼

Thanks for the chapter

Good chapter 😼

Thanks for the chapter