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heyy.. bro as a new writer i appericiate your work..i hope you write like this further

good

bro ,as i read till ch 5 .it's a quite good but i hope you can add some more logic and protagonist can be overpowered but you can do it slowly.. finally focus on world development as well as..make him face the reality .. The Undisputed Supreme reality..😶

bro i liked it lot probably one of best sports novel are i ever read the thing i liked most thet mc doesn't have so called overpowered system he also has work but i also feel you are inspired by hitting zone in many scenes ok but i can't read further because i am poor 😙😙🥲😗

princess be like my dear lazy panda become sexy panda🤩🤩😜

😑😑 2 sec silence for him..

best thing i like in this novel mc posses ice attribute that was fucking cool not like other novel only soo called females led can pooses but i also have complain why mc didn't fight much and this love favour on political side rather then fighting..😅😅also srry for grammer mistake😅

infinte sukyomi😅😅

As a fantasy reader i really don't like to read slice of life novel but this novel change my perspective and i am proudly able to say this is one of the best novel that I ever read. i hope writer upload 20 chapter per day. It's give me felling to never stop.