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InvictusKyrielight

InvictusKyrielight

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Reading aways was my favorite way of passing time, a way of experiencing fantastic things that can both ground and distance us from reality, It can use fantasy to bring new perspectives into our day to day problems, or simply be a way to relax during troubling times. Now I plan to try my hand at writing, thanks for reading this. Wish me Lucky!

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    Why he is always picked by surprise? Shouldn't his "magical" ADHD prevent this.

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    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    Why does he have eyebags? In his mother domain he should be at his strongest and most comfortable. Like Percy in the ocean.

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    He sounds whiny in this paragraph.

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    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    Pressure. Seeing someone you know being held as hostage can be a "small bit" terrifying imagine.

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    He is imitating his father...

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    He is 12

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    Thanks! Good work.

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    Thanks for the chapter! Greek gods will be Greek gods.

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    Why does he have the scar? His healing factor should leave nothing behind. I know some people find scars "cool", but is a little inconsistent, or he also have a terribly scared belly?

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  • InvictusKyrielight
    InvictusKyrielight10 months ago
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    Thanks for your work, great story!

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