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I think this is good, looking back the story does need more perspectives

2, I think you should just really speed up this arc and then move on to slice of life.

It’s 4 chapter’s ahead

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Really good chapter keep it up

Really good story ……………………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………………………..

I like the story but the grammar is bad, could you use something like ChatGPT to fix this. ……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..……………………………..

Thx for chap