Test_Misc

ok I'm dropping this here just in case there are readers like myself : The start of the novel , the very 1st chapter , is, in my opinion , the worst way to start a novel . What you have here is a desperate situation , where the mc and his companions are running away from a monster, and the chapter ends with the mc seemingly losing consciousness with all his companions injured, and the cliche "it feels like ages but it all began 5 days ago". And then the chapters after that ARE FCKG FLASHBACKS, like you took us from this situation, where they are d*ing ,TO A FCKG FLASHBACK? YOU LEFT ME STANDING HERE LIKE AN IDIOT? This K*LLS whatever excitement I had for this novel. These types of beginnings leave you with an emotional baggage, that is not lifted until the actual story reaches that event , before that you just left with this conflicting series of emotions, that just makes you resent the novel, it actually extinguishes whatever excitement and expectations I had with the novel. TLDR: The start is the worst type that I have seen, they leave you with a cliff hanger in the 1st chapter(seemingly when the mc is d*ing), and then the next chapters are flashbacks of how that happened, which may go on for 10 or 50 or 60 chapters , I don't know, i dropped it

ok I'm dropping this here just in case there are readers like myself : The start of the novel , the very 1st chapter , is, in my opinion , the worst way to start a novel . What you have here is a desperate situation , where the mc and his companions are running away from a monster, and the chapter ends with the mc seemingly losing consciousness with all his companions injured, and the cliche "it feels like ages but it all began 5 days ago". And then the chapters after that ARE FCKG FLASHBACKS, like you took us from this situation, where they are d*ing ,TO A FCKG FLASHBACK? YOU LEFT ME STANDING HERE LIKE AN IDIOT? This K*LLS whatever excitement I had for this novel. These types of beginnings leave you with an emotional baggage, that is not lifted until the actual story reaches that event , before that you just left with this conflicting series of emotions, that just makes you resent the novel, it actually extinguishes whatever excitement and expectations I had with the novel. TLDR: The start is the worst type that I have seen, they leave you with a cliff hanger in the 1st chapter(seemingly when the mc is d*ing), and then the next chapters are flashbacks of how that happened, which may go on for 10 or 50 or 60 chapters , I don't know, i dropped it.

these types of starts are the worst, it doesn't give you the excitement that would make you read on to find out how this happened, no, instead it gives you this baggage of mostly negative emotions that you have to carry till the actual story reaches the point of the start of the story, till then you are just sitting there with this stupid feeling that all of the progress till that point are useless, what is that point of all that progress if the med result is gonna be this desparate situation ? Fckg retards who don't know how to write begin their stories like this

...lost flag it is.

also you haven't listed the cultivation realm names and their strengths, how would we know how strong mc is if we don't know the general strength of the realms

bruh, have you ever heard about pronouns? you don't have to write their names every single time, use pronouns,like here instead of writing their complete names, which is a month full, just write "The four". why needlessly use names

I mean...the person gave up his own life for him, so calling him a true friend is only deserved

person close to me? better say" another friend ", the former sounds....wrong

....he forgot about the first and the very last thing they told him about not trusting others easily ... seriously strong mental DMG

bruh, even when 80% suppressed its still a force of like 2 million tons, how tf is he not winning