Writing a novel"What's Beyond Death "please give it a look
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The story is good and the author made sure that we do not hate the protagonist and mc friendship . Cons: 1. The story progress is slow even after 200 chapters there isn’t a ghoul when the main villain is supposed to be Ghoul emperor 2. The goddess not acting mature though I understand that she is 24 but she should act gracefully ( my opinion) 3. The cursing and women jokes are good at first but the became heavy later That’s all , overall 4 stars
The start is good with somewhat unique element and up to ch 100 I have no problem but from there the novel started to get boring and the MC with his sacrificing nature is a negative for me Around ch 200 It got plain boring and author tried tries to implement romance
This is a great line Author... I don't know if You planned to write this line or not but I liked it as it conveys two meanings 1. He cried out loud but he couldn't hear because of the attack 2.He really suffered in silence Good Job 👍
Man I thought this would be good but I feel like it’s a corny teenager who is writing this and the conversation between the characters is weird and forced . Not to mention the cringe
I know this is gonna irk some people...😈😈
Author didn't you mention that he is FIVE years old...Maybe he is FIVE months old
I said it's similar like super powered mother and want to fuck the sister ,create a harem with no logic at all ... These are very similar to the book I mentioned
You need to increase the chapter updates