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FicFrenzy15hBalas newcommer2so many plot holes.
"That's right," Sirius felt pleased with the unspoken understanding between him and James. He looked into Lily's emerald eyes and said, "If Dumbledore's guess is correct and there really is a traitor in the Order of the Phoenix, then Voldemort probably already knows that we don't intend to make Dumbledore the Secret-Keeper. Among the remaining options, I am the most likely one, and Voldemort will most likely try to find me. But they can't even dream that we will adjust the plan and make Peter the Secret-Keeper, which is like having an extra layer of insurance."- FicFrenzy1dBalas Hush19
This is good.
Hermione glanced at Professor Watson with two big black eyes hanging on the staff table. He was a tall and thin man with a long beard and a pointed hat. He was chatting animatedly with Professor Flitwick and Professor McGonagall, who were both heads of houses. Hermione frowned and looked at Harry. - FicFrenzy3dBalas Sky_eater
Because the 'church' suppressed druids in our original history too, but we don't clearly know to what extent this suppression was.
Author's Note: This text is a work of fiction and does not reflect any real religious views or beliefs. It is intended for entertainment purposes only and does not aim to offend anyone's sentiments. - FicFrenzy4dBalas Sky_eater
He is the head of Auror Office at this time up to he became minister at deathly hallows. Amelia bones is Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement right now.
"–Before Fudge came here, he told me that tomorrow the head of Auror Office Rufus Scrimgeour will bring people to occupy the castle and thoroughly investigate Hogwarts and the students and staff in the school. I really hope that the person who did all this secretly can feel ashamed of their actions and take responsibility for them. I don't know how to explain to Arthur and Molly that Hogwarts couldn't protect their daughter!" - FicFrenzy4dBalas Sky_eater
it was full of hair who knew if its man or woman
"You brought me a cat man?!" Hagrid exclaimed in surprise. - FicFrenzy5dBalas Devaamshu_Boro
Weird Wizarding Fetish.
In another part of the castle, the studious Percy Weasley couldn't bear the loneliness that Valentine's Day brought. Seizing an opportune moment during Professor McGonagall's transfiguration class, he skillfully transformed a salamander into the likeness of his beloved Penelope. A mischievous smirk danced across his face as he relished a few moments of pretending to be with her. - FicFrenzy7dBalas ai_kotoba
uagadou is a magic school like hogwarts and this place Wakadorga is different like a wizarding market or small village like hogsmeade.
Wakadorga, among the countries with flourishing magical civilizations, was known for its chaotic nature. This was perhaps due to the influence of its intricate Muggle social order. Even now, many people lived in tribal communities there, with the tribal leaders usually being witches with extensive lineage. - FicFrenzy11dBalas Kenny3408
sometimes but later shaved it, he was trying to look older as a professor at first.
Hermione glanced at Professor Watson with two big black eyes hanging on the staff table. He was a tall and thin man with a long beard and a pointed hat. He was chatting animatedly with Professor Flitwick and Professor McGonagall, who were both heads of houses. Hermione frowned and looked at Harry. - FicFrenzy23dBalas Kurotora
I did thanks
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i was just learning how to write and stuff, so early chapters are quite awkward.
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Thanks for your help. I am correcting the things you have commented.
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There are many mistakes and errors in early chapters but later they get better and better at later chapters.
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Sorry, it gets better as it goes on.
Bryan closed his eyes and took a deep breath, trying to control his emotions. He was shocked and furious by what he had just heard. - FicFrenzy1mthBalas KIINGCh 3 003 The New Commission
- FicFrenzy1mthBalas midgetydeath
I don't want to spoil anything BUT If you have read till the latest chapters or first about two hundred chapters then you must know that there are clues which say the MC intentionally stripped his own memories or something happened to his memories kr stuff related to his memory. So Was he truly reborn in this world without memories or did something happen? ............
- FicFrenzy1mthBalas Kazuki_Ohira
It depends upon how you describe "destructiveness".
In terms of sheer destructiveness, the Imperius Curse might be the most severe of the three Unforgivable Curses. However, its effects upon the victim were indeed the mildest. During Voldemort's reign of terror, many wizards unwilling to join his cause had been subjugated by this curse, but after receiving treatment, they exhibited no serious lingering aftereffects. This was the reason Bryan had been willing to take a chance and not immediately rescue Draco. - FicFrenzy1mthBalas A_W_87
Not a bad idea.
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