Heyy guys, ShiroHayasaka here. Sorry for the proud rating but I just feel like this novel is worth it. I say thanx to all my readers and I hope that you guys will continue to support me, especially those who were with me during the Pathos God period. I promise to put my all into this novel in hopes that it can get contracted. Once again thanx for your support.

Heyy guys, ShiroHayasaka  here. I bring sad news to all my devoted readers and fans, the novel The Pathos God has been officially cancelled. For some reasons, this novel did not reach the standard of the content editors so it was not offered a contract. I do hope you guys respect my reason even though it sounds silly because getting that contract had been one of my greatest dreams since I began novel writing. As my fans care about me, I also care about them and I wish that all those fans who have devoted time to reading The Pathos God will also try reading my new novel called Immortal Dreamer. I can't promise you that it will be good but I hope to see you guys enjoy. Thanx for your support as always and I wish you guys can try out this new novel.

Not many chapters, so I can't tell your stability of updates, but overall, the story and character design is amazing, it has r-18 in it but the story isn't only about s*x. Sure seeing the beginning, I thought it was gonna be like other smut novels but this one actually has depth. Keep it up.

How did I not start reading historical dramas since? This shit is amazing, I somehow can't seem to take my eyes off this novel, hell! Even the time I am using to review is paining me, well, time to get back to reading.

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Sorry for the proud self rating but I really feel like I deserve it, although I still think I need to improve, I am okay with the way I am progressing. I want to host a mini event, my book cover isn't looking up to date so I have decided to let the readers decide what the next one should be. Comment on this review and add the picture you think will fit the book as its cover and I will chose the one I think is best. The time limit is to the end of the week so try your best guys!

Very interesting to read and fun too, it has already been added to my list of top game novels. The authors writing is fluent and easy to understand, although there are not much chapters yet, I am proud to say that this is a masterpiece.

Very funny beginning, really gives me a high expectation for the story.

Hey lets meet on discord, my name is ShiroHayasaka#6929

I plan to make it an anime one day so its okay this way.

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A gifted writer he is, although I am not a fan of first person writing, I couldn't see this and just look away, the way the writer takes his time to explain the details really shows the amount of time and effort that was put into the work. Good job and keep it up, looking forward to more chapters.

A gifted writer he is, although I am not a fan of first person writing, I couldn't see this and just look away, the way the writer takes his time to explain the details really shows the amount of time and effort that was put into the work. Good job and keep it up, looking forward to more chapters.

Great beginning, perfect synopsis, really represents the story, a masterpiece so to say, if I could give more than five stars, I would definitely do it. Great combination of action, fantasy and romance, keep it up, looking forward to more chapters.

This is the highest I can rate myself, to be honest I personally think the storyline is great and it is in sync with what I had writing in the synopsis, however, I know that I still have a lot to work on. Patiently waiting for the day that I can personally give myself a 5 star rating.

Everything is great, from the grammar to the story line. It is a work of art which shows just how much the author put into it, keep it up and I expect more chapters like the current ones.

Overall the story and writing is great, but I must say that there is no character development, it looks to me that the character is just stagnant and having fun with girls. I wont say that is bad, but at least add some more interesting events.

I am getting there

Excellent grammar, and use of punctuation, I prefer third person form of writing but I have to say, good job and keep it up