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orv_lotmfan3mthBalas DaoistqdLqy5obviously , RI is waay ahead of ORV
As the Supreme Ruler in this world, Heavenly Dao has no emotion and no desire. It is only a powerful consciousness whose sole purpose is to maintain the rules and order that makes the world function.- orv_lotmfan3mthBalas ALIBABA_KUN
Li Qiye would solo the verse ( atleast for now 😅 )
However, one day, a sudden thought came to Wang Wei's mind. 'Why are there only 12 Layers? Why not 13?' - orv_lotmfan3mthBalas Daoist_DarkinRyu
not enough for me to smash
The lower the world, the more there are in quantity. For example there are more than ten millions smaller thousand worlds, less than a million medium thousand worlds, 100,000 or more greater thousand worlds. - orv_lotmfan3mthBalas L0ST_W0RDS
novel called Emperor's Domination
As the Supreme Ruler in this world, Heavenly Dao has no emotion and no desire. It is only a powerful consciousness whose sole purpose is to maintain the rules and order that makes the world function. - orv_lotmfan3mthBalas Reaper8726
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As the Supreme Ruler in this world, Heavenly Dao has no emotion and no desire. It is only a powerful consciousness whose sole purpose is to maintain the rules and order that makes the world function. - orv_lotmfan3mthBalas Post_Nut_Clarity
bro had one job but failed 🤣
Now, the Eye of Heavenly Dao notices a soul that managed to bypass its defense, and said soul has the potential to completely alter the fate and fundamental order of this world. - orv_lotmfan4mthDiterbitkan
I haven't gone past chapter 74 , but for now the world building seems great and very promising since we still haven't gone far in it Wang Wei is a decently written character , He's also not a retarded character like most Chinese MCs , he schemes and think as for romance , he only got 1 wife that he loves , so no harem , the writing quality and introduction in ( Let's say maybe first 40 chapters or 50 ? ) was pretty lacking , but it keeps getting better , exactly like what i heard from people , so I'm expecting it to become Peak asf going forward also this is author's first novel , so I'm excited to see how it would be if he finished this novel well and decided to make a second novel once he got more experience only problem i see besides the introduction style , is the grammar , you see a few grammer mistakes and a few repeated words , but it's nothing too bad as in "not unreadable" like MTL
- orv_lotmfan4mthBerkomentarCh -1 Author's Face-to-Face Talk
- orv_lotmfan4mthBalas LazySageDao
you haven't fixed it yet 😅
I Have No Desire To Train The The Competitor - orv_lotmfan4mthBalas Yubisaki
you haven't fixed it yet 😅
I Have No Desire To Train The The Competitor - orv_lotmfan1yrDiterbitkan
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