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I had to leave this here. I just completed the first 100 chapters few days ago and am somewhere around 120. This story started out slow, but the quality of writing has improved so much in such short time! I got goosebumps reading one of the chapters. The story turns dark and I love it. It's definitely worth reading till at least Chapter 110. You won't regret it. I'm excited to see how the magical and political situations develop and looking forward to explore more of Xelgar. P.S. Alora best waifu

I really like the descriptions used in the story. Each one feels unique in some way. Aizel has started out with having a pretty pessimistic outlook on life. I'm eager to see how this will change as he interacts with people in the fantasy world. What is also really cool is that he transitions between the two worlds periodically. Usually, in these type of stories, it goes only one way, so what the author has done with the premise is a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!