Shadowless98

The concept for training and system and the choice of character were quite interesting, however when he begins to show off in front of other people and performs his techniques becomes a little cringe. Not very smart and rather difficult to believe in.

Hey author I like what I’v read so far and this has great potential, when will we see more chapters ?

The idea is definitely new and I look forward to reading this book. I hope you keep updating! The writing is superb too.

The justification isn’ enough or convincing in this case. It would be better to leave it vague next time. such childish justification for death isn’ necessary.