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Honkay Star Rail

tsk tsk I could die of embarrassment. Just yesterday before going to sleep I solved it and I said to myself: “It's ok, it's perfect”. Hahaha I'll solve it right now...jsjssjsj

Sorry, English is not my first language. Yesterday I wrote just when I finished my classes. I will correct the mistakes before publishing today's chapters.

I'm sorry, I just found it boring, having to lock them in a room. And well, I wanted to pretend a divine whip, but it only appears once in the whole novel, just to make the reader aware of it.

The first chapter is good, what I have read is good.

Well, we're off to an interesting start. It would not have been better to call the entire content of this chapter. As chapter one or prologue Don't take me seriously either, but the prologue is very short. It reminds me of what's on the back cover of a book.

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Okay, I will try to study more grammar. >:3

Thank you for enjoying my work, I hope you enjoy the next chapters.

I have some chapters saved, but since English is not my main language. I have to edit them before publishing.