not sure what you are talking about. the entire book is in the 1st person, there is no 3rd person at all. i certainly wont be rewriting anything based on your feedback.

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This makes more sense later, as Ye comes from a lineage that is rare within the Nin Realm.

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That's good to know. Thank you for reading.

Very true. Archery, unarmed combat and fist techniques are some of the many skills Ye must acquire from Martial Arts Skill Tree.

Author here. Mechagear NEON is an action-packed thriller with more lore than you can shake a stick at. It is much darker than my other work, dealing with heavier themes like class division, authoritarianism and war. The world of Neon City is even more imperfect than ours, but I think there are still parallels to our society. If you're looking for a story to lose yourself in, specifically one with a futuristic or cyberpunk theme, this is the one.

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Thank you for the feedback. I think you'll find there's more character depth later in the series.

This is a very dark story with strong world building. The author has intricately crafted a detailed world. And most importantly, he presents his ideas in a digestible manner without relying on lore dumps. There's a lot of "showing" and little "telling", which creates immersion and lets the story flow smoothly. I'm looking forward to reading more.

A very well-written and immersive dark fantasy setting. The lore at the beginning does a good job establishing tone and I was quickly taken in by the story. This author excels at creating atmosphere, and weaves the theme and all essential story elements together with the masterfully. A delightfully dark read.

Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I look forward to reading your comments.

This has a very immersive setting, although I wish there were less of a lore dump at the beginning. The characters are well-developed and the story moves along quickly. It's easy to read and I recommend it as a cyberpunk-type of story.

I've been a fan of the medieval fantasy and cultivation genres for a while now, so when I heard about this new novel, Realm of the Transcendants, I was immediately intrigued. After reading through the first few chapters, I can definitely say that it doesn't disappoint. The main character, Naoki Ozawa, is portrayed as a young man with no real direction in life after the death of his mother. This means that he has no real attachments to his home universe and can be transported to other universes with ease. I really liked how this aspect was explored as it allowed for an interesting journey of self-discovery for Naoki as he finds his way in the new world. The world is full of interesting characters and creatures It is dominated by women, and I enjoyed how this concept was explored. Overall, Realm of the Transcendants offers an exciting read with its unique combination of medieval fantasy x cultivation. The characters all seem very well developed and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Hello, I am the author. Let me tell you, without any bias whatsoever, that this novel will rock your soul. Only read this if you're looking for something really good. - The Author

I absolutely loved it! The plot was captivating and the characters were really well-developed. The author did a great job of intertwining different storylines to keep me engaged on every page. The worldbuilding was also fantastic; I felt like I was right there with the characters experiencing everything as if it were real life. Overall, this is a great webnovel and I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an engaging read!