The narration in this book are good including the story and pace. I find some good use of words and i would really like to read the story further....

The story worth giving a read, and the outline is also great. Looking forward to how the story unfolds

I really like this book, the system description is also well written here. it has a good number of chapters to start with and i can feel that this book has potential to grow much higher. I highly recommend this book, if you wanna read some system stuff

The start of the book is great, though there is only one chapter i expect the story to go as good as the synopsis. Dear Author, your book is amazing and i m looking forward to it ☺️ Bring some chapters soon..

The story is awesome as well as the plot. The author described things very clearly and i loved the why this story starts One recommendation to the author, i have seen you writing few words with the star mark (*) insted try by adding a first chapter for certain meaning of few world and then write the novel. because it's confusing for a reader of he/she reads a word with a star mark, and if he/she know the word it became frustrating Looking forward to next chapters 😊

A good start, as for now there's only few chapters but i can definitely tell that the story is gonna be amazing The title, it's awesome and i really like the way the story is written Good work, and i m waiting for more chapters ☺️

An incredible beginning of novel! It really hooks you from the first minute of reading it! The narration and the descriptions make you feel that you are there in the novel. Without a doubt, it became one of my favourite novels. Add it to your library, you won't be disappointed!

This is the amazing novel, the writing is totally good and i wanted to read more... it's a good new start to read

Dzamn... it's amazing. A good piece of work, easily understandable and immersive!

The novel has a good pace, and as the synopsis says, the novel is gonna blow your mind. The way author has described everything in this story is amazing. It's a good book to start!!

I love this book so much that i got lost in it. the story pacing is so nice that i didn't expect.

Entertaining as well as well written story. I m glad that i read and i was surprised by how the story goes. Another quick good read to start!!!

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describe his voice type please

Use single quotes( '......' ) to show the thoughts of a person, it will be easier for readers to know.

This is one of the best thing that i have read till now. This one is highly recommended for people who want something entertaining. The story is amazing

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